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Heaven weeps for its daughter
While Hell rejoices its son.
A star falls to the Abyss,
Yet still shines on.

Oh Angel in the darkness,
Dancing for your one true love.
Star among the ashes,
Your only sin was love.

Through darkness and through fire
She's traveled to your side.
Lord of dark and demons,
You have claimed your bride.

Oh Angel in the night,
Laying in his arms.
Caught in his eyes of embers,
Your only sin was love.

Hands so stained with blood
Caress the innocent skin.
In his heart lies only her,
In hers there's only him.

Oh Angel in the fire,
Bathed in flaming light.
You've fallen far from home,
Though your only sin was love.

Two souls, once so far apart,
Joined now in the night.
Two hearts now beat as one
As the darkness weds the light.

Heaven weeps for its daughter
While Hell rejoices its son.
The Angel dwells with Darkness,
Her only sin was love.
A poem I wrote for my beloved. Due to deviant art continually fucking up, I had to remove the French title. Apparently the accents over the letters is too much for it to process. :roll:
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Azukeri-Mercer Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2009
Favorite POEM EVER!!!!!!!!!
I found this forever ago and wrote it out to hang in my room! I'm glad to have found it again!
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Raini-Tempest Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you like it. I've been working to make my poetry available as prints so I will be sure to let you know.
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Azukeri-Mercer Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2009
I read a few more, but I'm waiting till I'm more aware to post comments. You're pretty good, better than me, by both me and my friends' accounts. Keep writing. =)
And please do.
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Raini-Tempest Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much. :)
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Azukeri-Mercer Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2009
Np, nice things make the world go round. Otherwise the universe would be, for lack by better words, screwed.
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Gothilia Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009
very well written, I love it^^
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Raini-Tempest Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :)
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Gothilia Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009
you're welcome^^
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LordTohrment Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
very beautiful
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SierraLeNoir Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2008
Very well done. I like it :)
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Raini-Tempest Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :)
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rheherem Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2008   Photographer
I, the girl who comments on everything, can thin of nothing to say. this is amazing!
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postaldude66 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2008
Fantastic poem! good luck in the contest, i think you have a very, very good chance.
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Xfish-netsX Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2007
Wow, this is really good.
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robbeey Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2007
i love this is iz really good :)
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pyronixcore Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
::TBL::

Congrats on winning the DAN competition Laura!!! :clap:
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DreadPersephone Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2007
I do believe I voted for you and did not fave nor comment on this piece of stunning brilliance! Please forgive my forgetfulness and allow me to offer my humble praise now.

Beautiful! It's no wonder you won my dear.
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Raini-Tempest Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
:flirty:
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DreadPersephone Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2007
I'm not entirely sure what that means my dear.
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Raini-Tempest Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Just my way of saying thanks for the nice comment.
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DreadPersephone Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2007
Ah of course it is. You're more than welcome!
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notemodamit Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2007
lovely just lovely
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Kaeldra-1 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2007
That's brilliant hun. I love this so much!
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ravynsfaery Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2007  Professional Photographer
love it. :heart: i vote for your piece.
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kabbalart Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Outstanding! I love it!
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blackicehearted-pixi Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2007
ahhh our own angels that fall from heaven just for us.... may we treasure them always. love it dear one, very good work!
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ahollowvoice Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2007
"Caught in his eyes of embers,
Your only sin was love."

Absolutely stunning, I'm all but speechless. Lovely work and dedication to the rhyme scheme Raini. :glomp: simply gorgeous.
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Raini-Tempest Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug: Thanks love, I appreciate it.
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VampressSadria Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
It's beautiful. I loved it. Makes me think of a certain someone as well. :aww: :heart: :+fav:
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